Needs more fleshing out.
Melodies unique and enjoyable. EwaSC is right, sounds like a bar of some sort.
Guess I just want it to be longer. Instruments are kind of attack-y too.
Needs more fleshing out.
Melodies unique and enjoyable. EwaSC is right, sounds like a bar of some sort.
Guess I just want it to be longer. Instruments are kind of attack-y too.
I see what you mean with attack-y, it was really quickly done, so I didn't spend too much time on details, ha. Thanks.
Better than the original.
I was already entranced when you started singing, so I checked your link and I was amazed to discover that I liked it... WAY less than your version. I'm glad you decided to showcase your voice. It's the strongest part of this song.
Thank you so much! I'm extremely flattered!
Really swell.
I hesitated to give a 10, but I really can't find large enough a flaw in this song. Whether you actually play or simply composed the song, you have a lot of talent, and I really enjoyed listening to this composition. The title too beckoned some powerful imagery in me. Thanks.
The only flaw i can find in it its a bit short and cuts a bit to harshly, i may change that sometime.
thanks for your kind words.
-cal.
edit: aaaand i changed it ;)
Think it needs a little more.
Reading the storyline of this song, I feel as though it could be more epic. I mean, you're describing the final stage of technological evolution. I think if this were the case, the leading instrument would definitely be a choir or powerful strings, though I do get why you went with an electronic feel. The feeling I get from this song is more of one of preparation, which honestly does fit the ensuing war motif.
Simply from a musical standpoint, I just feel the song could use more substance. You obviously have talent, this song just needs something to make it standout. Nice work though.
Thanks for advice. Appreciated :)
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